Conquering fear in the face of death
Overcoming perils with labored breath
Under hell fire mortars, I still press on
Rage on my enimies, until they’re all gone
Acceptance of death, that may come soon
Going on recon, under light of full moon
Exit wound of bullet, flesh wound won’t stop
Onward I go, till I see the last bad guy drop
Under any and all danger, I’ll soon overcome
Staying true to my honor and beat of my drum
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Prompt: Courageous (Acrostic)
In a list
A contest entry
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nicely written. This is a good write on what you believe that war is... honorable. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering this into my contest.
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Fantastic
Well done acrostic. Good flow, easy to read. Super tribute. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
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Nice acrostic. Thanks for entering this.
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amazing :)
I absolutely LoVe it! and it really touches my heart because I have thought about going to the army [a few times] at the age of 12 and 15.
I know I'm young but this is a really good poem -Marissy- -
Good Going!
This certainly is courageous. Powerful acrostic. Written like a Vet. All the best in the Contest. 
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Thank you for your wonderful comment Kathleen.
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