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Destructive.Destructible.Destructed.

Destructive.
Debris flying through the air
Glass fragment pieces scattering across the floor
Nothing is one piece anymore

Destructible.
I'm so weak, just want someone I can call my own.
Make me smile and I fall so easily
I'm destructible.

Destructed.
Taken apart mentally
Piece by piece
Left broken to make it on my own.

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Not my best, but it has appeal..

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  • I-Feel-weightless
    May 24
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    It's good. Not your best. But I can relate. I feel like that too sometimes. Good job.