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The Eyes

The eyes they foolow me as I go,
As though they watch some interesting show.
The eyes don't seem to care
Becasue I look back when I dare.
But they eyes never look away,
In their place the eyes will stay.
The eyes hold my gaze,
And won't let go until I faze.
My eyes are the first to blibk,
Losin this battle just to sink.
No I leave in sorrow.
Knowing the eyes will follow.

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  • Paralyzed Dead-Eyes
    May 21
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    wow that is great i love it


  • demon.known
    May 21

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    Wow, i can feel the same way most of the time. Like every one is watching you, like you're about to fall, or you have something on your face. But then also in a paranoid way that keeps you looking over your shoulder. I like it! Obviously.