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Answering your Questions

Why do you wonder?
when you should know.
I love you, I won't let go.

Why do you doubt me!
When you can't slumber
I will sing for you, no other.

If I say I won't leave I mean it
I am not trying to cast you away
I am seeing if you want me to stay.

When you fear I will protect you
I will not let a finger touch you
You're with me so tears will be few.

You have scars, I have some too
We have all been through something hard
I will not let you, again, be marred!

We will get through our pasts, but
We will do it as a whole not a half!
So don't talk so silly, don't be daft.

Of course I will laugh when you are old
I will laugh with you, because I love you
I will be mesmerized by your stories, retold.

I will gladly compromise for eternal love!
But I am very stubborn too, you must know
When you should keep strong or let go!

I will always smile the biggest smile
When you leave a surprise for me!
Your presents are the only ones I need.

I will stay with you till one of us dies
I will stay beyond that if I can...
But I don't want death in our plans.

Now that all your questions are answered
Will you be there and take care of me?
Or will you let me drown out in swirling seas?

It is your turn to change the tides, but
Will you be strong enough to swim with me
Or will we be lost in this World's deceit?




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  • Esoteric-Ima
    May 21
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    Thank you,

    It's beautiful, and just what i needed right now.


  • Heroesrox
    May 21

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    This is very nice, dear. I love your wording and emotions. It feels sad in bits and then totally different! Awesome work, hon. Best wishes and thanks so much for sharing.


    • Beverlynohime
      May 21
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      Thank you for your comments! ^_^
      They're always so nice and I welcome them warmly.
      Make sure you stop by more often. I have been a busy writer lately. haha
      I have yet to check out your new work! Can't wait to read it!


  • Antipodi
    May 21

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    Sent by mistake ...a beautiful piece it so much reminded me of a problem a friend is going through and I hope you arent too ...I have some friends who i really care about and it is sad to see such angst ..

  • guardian warrior
    May 21

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    My only real comment on this is a . Principessa, that was heartfelt and sentimental. I loved it. I think I know what I am going to write.

    "I will gladly compromise for eternal love!
    But I am very stubborn too, you must know
    When you should keep strong or let go!"
    That was a good answer.
    signed
    Inspiration

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