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Te Amo' Mi Amor

-"I've fallen in love with you

and I'll never let you go.

I love you more than anyone,

I just had to let you know.

 

And if you ever wonder why,

I don't know what I'll say,

but I'll never stop loving you,

each and every day."

 

 

Your tender words my anchor

that holds me safe in place

I don't know the reason why

maybe an angels been misplaced

 

For in your eyes I see the way

to a brand new kind of love

That kind of passion rises up

and I can never get enough

 

 

I love you more then anything

more then the sun the moon the sky

Your the light thats shining bright

that makes this worn heart sigh

 

Sweet laughter brings a day renewed

and I simply fall for you

A funny thing I must say

my heart has been tattooed

 

 

Across the heart an "Te Amo Mi Amor"

at the bottom holds your name

With a ink that can't fade away

for this love is not a game

 

No words, no verse, no sonnet or haiku

can be enough to say it all

So I send this poem in treasured hopes

that you can hear this lovers call

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt Used:

-"I've fallen in love with you and I'll never let you go. I love you more than anyone, I just had to let you know. And if you ever wonder why, I don't know what I'll say, but I'll never stop loving you, each and every day." (Use in poem.)
Given by contest holder...Lines Unknown?


Had to use the lines in the poem..so I started with them...(first two stanzas)


SHARE THE LOVE...BE SURE TO SHOUT IT FROM THE MOUNTAINTOPS!!




TE AMO MI AMORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!


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  • Wow so loving and compassionate your love is so overflowing and truly abundant!!! This piece is magnificent!!! I love everything about it your words so gentle and so tender and so so so very loving and kind!!! I love you sis!!!!


  • Not-The-Sun silver member
    June 30

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    this is a very lovely write
    "That kind of passion rises up
    and I can never get enough"
    is so beautiful


  • songstress80
    June 30

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    WOW!!!

    congrats big time on the gold trophy!!! you go, girl!!!

    wow! i mean wow! *fans self* such emotion and love...wow! very sensual and loving and sweet! ah love is so wonderful here! did i mention, "wow!" ? nicely done! glad i have you as a favorite/friend!

  • I got so carried away from the words of the poem
    I forgot to tell you how beautiful the back ground is
    and fits the love and soul of the poem Hugs ♥♥

  • I see why this one gold

    so touching from the heart and soul
    makes the tears well up inside
    when the love poured from your soul
    has forever shined

    absolutely beautiful.. the heart never lies
    and with each word.. you stated this ever so fine
    Hugs Angel♥

  • Nice

    A true romantic soul.

  • very beautiful portrait of love good luck with that love u too


  • geckogirl silver member
    May 22
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    Excellent take on the prompt.. background is fitting for wonderful sweet words...


  • DolceVito gold member
    May 22

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    Me gustan mucho los dos, la poema y el amor...bien hecho, Promesa de Pasion
    Con amor
    Vito

  • Passionately loving poetry, filled with genuine emotion, you are once again proving just how good a poet you are.

    Wonderful writing, and a stunning background too

    Jeff

  • The background is beautiful and the words along with the prompt fit together like they were meant too. Beautifully said C


  • Griswold silver member
    May 21

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    Wonderfully done, an excellent use of the phrase prompt given. The background is very pretty too. Love you... Scott

  • danzt3
    May 21

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    I will enjoy looking up more of your stuff and reading it. You are very talented. Your passion for love and life make me glad to be a live. I need to send you link to someone I care about. you express so wonderfully,
    Ric Sis....Debby

  • This is EXACTLY what I was looking for.
    It explains what I wanted clearly, without being sappy.
    Congrats, You've made the finalists list.
    Thanks for entering my contest. Good luck.

  • Come e bellessima questa poesia, well it is just marvelous how you speak of eternal love and the way your passion does rise to the surface in all your writes.

    This one is no exception and deserved of a podium stand I might add.

    I like it, I like it so!

  • Muy Bueno

    Muy bueno amore. Very good love. I'm not up there in age but i hope my comment is still taken to heart. Alot of love and passion in this. Who ever was in mind when you wrote this should be blushing like crazy.{I know I would} All in all a wonderful poem.


  • Daniel1992
    May 21

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    speachless

    Its beyond what i can write and I can tell its not just any poem. I wont forget your poem you can be sure of that.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    May 21
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    stunning

    full of love and beauty of heart..excellent..

  • Awesome

    Wow I really loved it. I really do. It reminds me of my affecition for my boyfriend but like I said before it was really awesome! 5 no 10 stars for that beautiful writing.

  • OH Victoria

    In You

    Melting is this heart of mine,
    more each and every day
    For the way you look at me,
    and in the perfect words you say

    That passion that comes shining through,
    always warmer than the sun
    Your honesty is so beautiful,
    and will never be outdone

    The fact we feel in each of us,
    the beating of a second heart
    And know to whom it does belong,
    we felt it from the start

    Our life may be a rocky road,
    both with emotions that are bruised
    But our love will tend to all those needs,
    as we're no longer confused

    Hold my hand we'll walk through time,
    forsaking all the rest
    Knowing in our hearts and souls,
    together we are the best

    Te amo mi amor, Victoria I love you
    Rick

  • sweetly sentimental. ah, love...
    and, i love the rolled r in your author notes!

  • Good Job sweetheart, this is very romantic. I dig good romance, of course.
    And I am REALLY diggin that background.

    • Thank you *bows* to you..You can use the background iffen you wish.. I made it

      (if you do can you send so i can read a masterpiece?? por favor)

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