Please help me
For I've begged
And I've screamed
However,
Is my scream but a whisper?
Has my voice gone unheard?
I shout and I plead,
& noone hears not a word
Have you noticed the scars
Who've made it their home on my arm?
Please help me
I scream once again
But noone responds
Okay then..
That's it!
For this is the end
I lay on the floor
And take out a knife
God,Please forgive me,
but this is my final goodbye
"I'm done playing my part,
In this script we call life"
You see me in anguish
And come to my aid
Blood is now everywhere,
And you are too late
I called for your help
And you left me alone
Doctor how is she?
'Sorry she's gone'
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Comments
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beautiful... i love the linesbut this is my final goodbye
"I'm done playing my part,
In this script we call life"
it's really good!!! it's like amazing =D
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This is something I think everyone can relate too, and the end was very sad. This whole poem was kinda heavy.
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This was a sad poem, but emotional.
"Have you noticed the scars
Who've made a home on my arm?"
That was a nice wya of putting iti like your style
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It soesn't rhyme and rhyming was the rule... sorry Xxx
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