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JustGrey

a flicker of passion in the eyes is a danger;
so eyes to the ground when we speak,

you always were a master of rhetoric,
though now you remain silent and meek...


We probably used to have trust but
trust can rust;
in fact, I often wonder if it ever
was there at all.

Face the past, it never
was an honest leader
and the future is just as uncertain.

I ask you to look at me now...

I wonder what you think you see...

Are you seeing...me?

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  • Tegram
    September 21
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    Thought provoking.....

    Thanks for reading my poem.

  • AngelWingz
    May 24

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    Whoa.... this so cool..

    I like the idea of trust not deep enough as is the future uncertain, very contemplative.. wicked mate.
    there is only one constant.. TRUTH!