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and the stars called her beautiful

 

I took five paces back and I saw her there. She was like an echo of a sunbeam and its radiance made itself known by the waves in her hair. Is this the one the stars call beautiful? Am I so in awe of her gorgeous design that I have been rendered speechless amidst this place? I pick flowers and put them in her hair, in this garden that no one knows where.

 

 

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AP Name: Lowercase Prelude

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  • Diminished Capacity gold member
    June 26

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    This is beautiful. Great imagery, and I can see a hint of rhyme which I like.
    Thank you so much for your entry.


  • tuesdae
    June 3
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    this is beautiful. I loved every single word.


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    May 22

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    Beautiful words..... the imagery is astounding..

    becca


  • Lady Australis silver member
    May 22
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    beautiful


  • poet2angels gold member
    May 22

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    Gorgeous, romantic and just plain sigh material...

    Lynda


  • movedon
    May 21

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    holyyyyyyyyyyyy crackatowa!!!!!!!!

    i have such a stunning image in my mind that i cant even being to say how amazing this is! just take your clappies and go!


  • hisaddiction
    May 21
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    I have no words that would do you justice.


  • Candy Morphine
    May 21
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    aww this is so damn gorgeous

  • bookworm987
    May 21
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    This is beautiful. Love it.

    [Liz<3]


  • DreamtSong-x
    May 21
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    I love this, it's beautiful.

    -- Tor


  • They Say Shannon
    May 21

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    I really really liked this. (:

    It had a great, beautiful feel to it.
    What I was looking for.

    Please put your name in the AN, please. <3

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