Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

primordial fools

we are
armageddon

criminal in
the mouth
of decay.

revolution none-
a masochist hollow
beyond faith

fragile under
a savage facade
of civility

an unintelligible
generation-
medicated on
a comatose design

we are
primordial fools

the final mistake.

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • Ahh, so resfreshing to read this. Sadly every word of this is true. It leaves me feeling down sometimes, but knowing there are at least one handful of people out there like you give me a bit of hope. Absolutely stunning, dear

  • oops, I forgot to come back and comment on this... My mind wanders too much. Anyway, I am enjoyed the write hun but am still waiting for you to post some of the pieces I read while I was there
    Love ya

    Juls

  • You wrote! It's nice to see new words from you. Like the underlying message to humanity in this..wonderful C