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Hidden Caves

Hidden caves
With sparkled gems
Inside a maze
Hid from them

For rare eyes
Undeserving
Only the blind
Can prove they're worthy

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I wrote this at the writing confrence.

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  • JetBlack5111
    June 17

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    hey thx ur for ur comment
    i like this one a lot, like the last two lines
    its mysterious how the blind can only prove they are worthy


  • Avalanche.
    May 28
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    I love this poem its coooooool


  • YourPinUpDoll
    May 21

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    what is a writing conference? i have never heard of it...

    Either way, i like this, very sophisticated and yet so short and simple.. i cant find the word to explain that, but i definitely will!!!

    Loves
    Christa

    • Unbreakable3
      May 21
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      A writers confrence was a... its hard to explain. I went to a college and there were different sessions that were taught by published authors, not famous famous ones but still, they knew what they were doing. And we went and eard them speak and we got to get writign tips and we got to write different things there, another thing i wrote there was in a session where we had to write abotu a persons hands, and i put that up too! It was really fun you should ask your teachers if they know of any and can sign up for some.

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