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Unsure

I'm no longer sure
of the events.
I don't know how
we got there.
I don't remember
why it was.
I'm no longer sure
it wasn't fair

You're supposed to
lose the doubt.
I know i should
be sure now
I should remember
it wasn't my fault.
I'm supposed to
be sure of how...

I know I'm not
quite right
I know I did it
the wrong way
That's why I'm unsure
Why I don't remember
what happened that day...

Author notes

this is about something i've been thinking about recently, that happened ages ago, and i can't remember all the details, because it's never been talked about, and now i doubt myself

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  • Perfect Asymmetry
    May 22, 2009
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    I loved the last stanza and can totally relate to the poem.
    Well done!
    Nela