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Your little cheeks are what keep me smiling
Your little feet jump to every beat
Your little blue eyes are like little spy's
Your red hair reminds me that your mine
Your smile can light up a room
Your two teeth are devine
Your little sigh's are to cute
Your the cutest baby I've ever seen
Your a little me
And when you cry it makes a part of me die
You have the fattest thighs!
You can make anyone smile
Your my baby boy
My little guy
And I will always love you
Because your mine
I'll always protect you
You'll never have anything to worry about
You'll be fine
I love you
And everything I've said about you is true
Your my baby boy
And soon to be a child

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  • Awww!

    So sweet! I had a smile on my face all the way through, you've brightened my day with this piece, I am glad I came across it. Lovely piece, thanks for sharing.

  • sweet

    very sweet write!! My lil sis jus had a baby boy, made me think of how cute babies are, like all that was penned, but favorite part had 2b "your little blue eyes are like little spies" So descriptive!! I could just imagine his little eyes scanning and observing the world around him:} sounds lk your a great mom!! Just the fact that you wrote about him says alot for your character, wish my mom would have thought and acted in my best interest, but such is life. I am glad to know that I have a little nephew that I can love and protect just as you will, and are doing-with your child! Look forward to reading more of ur writes, this piece made my heart smile!


  • Antebellum
    June 3
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    My little guy
    And I will always love you
    Because your mine
    I'll always protect you
    You'll never have anything to worry about
    You'll be fine


    awe so sweet.
    lovely write here, very heartfelt.

  • Antebellum
    June 3

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    My little guy
    And I will always love you
    Because your mine
    I'll always protect you
    You'll never have anything to worry about
    You'll be fine


    awe so sweet.
    lovely write here, very heartfelt.

  • Such an adorable poem filled with addoration for your (from what you've described) ahmazing little boy. You can feel the love you have for him. great write! so sweet.

  • Awww...this is absoulutly adorable. You should print this poem out and frame it and put it on his wall with your first picture with him. So adorable, i love it so much. What's his name?????????
    Wishing you the bast of luck!!
    xoxo,
    --Gooshawn


  • Dixie Dawn gold member
    May 29

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    such a sweet loving, beautiful tribute to your son. A lovely flowing style, made me think of my boy, he's in Afghanistan right now, how precious they are when they are little, they fly away all too soon...its a wonderful write, thank you..

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