Sitting there in a hot van,
waiting for you to arrive.
Anxious, and even a little nervous,
Ive never felt more alive.
And then, as if in a dream,
there you are smiling at me.
And suddenly you were in my arms,
and that's where I was meant to be.
I had waited so very long,
for you to just come home.
And, my dreams come true, you're here with me,
and I no longer have to be alone.
The time flew so rapidly by,
as time on it's merry way will do.
A sadder thing never happened to me,
than to have to live without you.
The warmth and love of your kiss,
the welcoming feel of your embrace.
But the day we had to part,
I melted at the tears upon your face.
Now, my heart feels empty,
without you being here.
And my home is quiet and lonely,
without you being near.
But my arms wont be empty for long,
till I can hold you again.
Home is always waiting here for you,
and our future together to begin.
I love you, Dawn.
A contest entry
- Your View On The World by K-a-r-s.
550 points, ended August 20, 16 entries
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Comments
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Hmm...i kind of get what this has to dowill my contest. But it kind of doesn't have to do with my contest. It was a very nice poem though. Good Job. Oh but your real name in the authors notes. Good Luck in the contest.
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Such a lovely free verse write...The flow is beautiful as are the words...Love story unfolding....Magnificent!
Mom 
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made me cry
This poem made me cry the first time I heard it and it still makes me cry. I love you darling
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*wipes the tears away and kisses you tenderly* And I love you
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*tears up* this is so Beautiful... I am sure Mommy will Love this... your work is great Papi... she will be back... you and I both know that.. and one day that Picture will be complete.. ..
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Good luck to you both..very touching piece
Always
Tory
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This is beautiful, and I am glad that you have found someone very special to share your life with you. Blessing to you both. I hope for nothing more than your happiness together.
Your friend, and sister.
Joann
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