In the middle of this stream
I've run out
trapped like a trampoline
I'm in a spot
Adorned with misery
this won't do
Father God in heaven
where are you?
Lacking wisdom in extremes
shower me
I'm growing dimmer
by degrees, see?
If your hand will interject
I'll be fine
for the moment, I'm insane
fix my mind
Like a dangling carrot
out to dry
if you don't come through
its bye, bye...
Author notes
Oh God ! My journey is halted, please refuel me...Unknown.
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Comments
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cool
but what if god doesn't does that mean there is no god...i don't think so because if he helped everyone who asked..then we would have no free will..god has given us free will so we can choose to follow him or not....mmm..man i'm confusing myself now....nice one ...keep cool
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In the middle of the stream i have run out, a good take on the prompt, also on life being like a stream. Well done
David
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Nicely said the truth and wonderful impact you brought by the words of your poetic talent..well done and many thanks for sharing this poetry..
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a good poem, ah we all get in a mire now and again and then we need a helping hand to lift us into smiles of hope.
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