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Ana

Pinch an
inch?
and I am gone
Out  comes the
skeleton
and these
measurements
still scream

Pig/


Polished to
imperfection
I waste
away
and where is
this beauty
you spoke
Ana?//

Songs of
calories and
pounds
and perhaps
i'll never
eat again

Remember me
in my

opaq
uen
es
s
///

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  • Sailuj
    June 12
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    Interessant. J'aime ton style.