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Less is More

Sitting here wondering
Where did everything go
Has it disappeared
or flew through the window

Maybe I held my grasp too tightly
Maybe they feel opposed
Maybe I dont give a damn
Maybe Ive turned closed

Sitting here in a state of bliss
No caring about the trouble
Happiness has found it's way
Into my secured little bubble

I guess its true what they say-
That less is truly more
I'm actually perfectly content
With my heart laying on the floor

Author notes

This was thrown together in a minute and a half
I just sat down and didnt stop typing till it came out
It's just one of those things that u feel coming on and when u sit down to write it just flows out
I know it has a lot of errors but this is heartfelt to the soul

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • tru-luv
    May 23
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    lmao i didnt even re-read it after i wrote it. I didnt want to how bad it sucked. Yea thats so like me to write something that doesnt even make sense. lmao

  • Yeah i've have my own mental block write now, and it fn sucks. But this is good. I feel you want to convey more but are being passive. Let it out, let your heart really lay on the floor in a puddle of its own raw emotion.

    ps. Maybe I let held my grasp too tightly.

    did u mean maybe i let myself hold my grip too tightly
    or maybe i was grasping too tightly