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Pollution, Pollution

Pollution, pollution
It is so bad
Every time I think about it
It makes me so sad

We live on Earth
Earth treats us well
With all the pollution around
Our Earth doesn't feel so swell

Pollution, Pollution
It hurts Mother Earth
There's no need for all of this
She's been there since birth

We can all stop pollution
We just have to take time
Did you know that pollution
Is considered a crime?

Pollution, Pollution
This just has to stop
We all can do something
And then Earth will love us nonstop


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  • Moroni
    May 21

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    The first two lines had a bit of a bumpy rythm. And the rhyming could have been better at some parts, however the rest was great!