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Prompt : Suicide Letter

I hate myself more than I have ever hated anyone else
Tonight I will fall from grace
Yesterday is memories fain
Tomorrow will never come...
Do you understand, little one
I disapear just to be found
I kill just to hear the sound
I cut just so you will see
Do you understand, child, this is me
I have no reason to see tomorrow
Today was hell, filled with sorrow
I hope one day, you will see
We see our selves as we wish we could be
No one really knows who they are, you see?
Do you understand, little one?
I am no-one...

Author notes

I was actually thinking about this poem last night, when I saw your contest I realized i should write it out! *O**T**E**P**S**A**I**N**T

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  • angelfalls.silently
    May 21

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    that was amazing i would give u 10000000000000000001 applause but i can only go to 3! it was very good another 1 of my favs on ap

  • phoebe cooper
    May 21
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    radicall

    wow well good keep it up
    XXxxXXx


  • Jazzlyn
    May 21
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    good job
    please put your name spaced in the AN


  • moaner
    May 21

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    woh! read AN, very freaky that should happen. awesome last letter, and it rhymed too! was sad but also insightful, well done, good luck in the contest x