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Suicide Note

This is my letter to you:
Now you question the person i am inside,
Now theres nothing left to hide
So here it goes this is my letter.
Hope you're all right, things have been rough for me. I've been thinking all night every night, about the places I''d be, If I maybe just tried to do a little more for you, you might have let me become the person i needed to be. Whats left for me to learn? It is with these words I leave you. There is only one person I regret leaving, and he knows who he is I hope. And to that person, I'm sorry. You did what you could to help, but for me it wasn't enough.

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Lillie Young Darkness-My Home

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  • Jacob S. Steadman
    May 21

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    Suicide is painless it brings on many changes and you can do the same thing if you please.
    I know I am already dead and just a ghost so it won't bother me.


  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    May 21

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    Oh my very sad.
    I could feel the sadness here.
    And the emotion jumped off the page.
    Well written piece .
    -Mandi


  • Tqop
    May 21

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    I don't know what to say but, if you gave God a lettter like this, He wouldn't appreciate it. This is a bad idea for a contest.


  • Jazzlyn
    May 21
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    very emotional and just wat I asked for
    good job


  • moaner
    May 21
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    awwww so sad. very well written. to the point and painful. well done, good luck in the contest x

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