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Will you?

If I reach for your hand, will you hold it?

If I hold out my arms, will you hug me?

If I go for your lips, will you kiss me?

If I capture your heart, will you love me?


I love you

Author notes

Jus some random thoughts. I'm feeling better now than I have in a while

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  • Soul Blight
    June 5
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    Simple and descriptive. Good choice of words in a short poem.

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