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When I Kiss You

When I kiss you, I can feel the touch of your hands,
smooth and soft, you squeeze my own,
securing my hands behind your back,
they lie on your waist, pulling you close.

When I kiss you, I can look down into your eyes,
a deep dark auburn gaze into me,
our eyes reflect each other,
they search for hints of love.

When I kiss you, I can hold your hug,
your arms are wrapped about my neck,
while curvy hips sway, holding my hands,
our bodies delicately touch, making you smile.

When I kiss you, I can see the hair dangling in your face,
I run a finger across your forehead,
brushing it behind your ear,
it frames your smooth white face, making you blink.

When I kiss you, I can taste your lip gloss,
flavor of sweet wild strawberry,
teases my lips and tounge,
tickling me, it makes you giggle.

When I kiss you, I hope its just like Ive imagined,
I hope my first kiss,
will be everything and anything Ive imagined,
but if its better, I wont mind.

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  • Kira65
    June 13
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    I love it , a great write!

  • This was very good. I loved the way you wrote this and the tone in which you wrote it .Thank you for sharing this with me. You've done a wonderful job. Thanks for entering the contest and best of luck to you. Kahy