Elegant angles, fluttering from skies.
coldness trembles, wipe tears gentle eyes.
soft music travels within the breeze,
white flakes cover ground, angels leave.
Author notes
Beautiful pic penman xxx
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A contest entry
- Picture Contest by penman.
900 points, ended May 23, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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congrats on your honorable win! it was a win very well deserved.
it's a very beautiful short and you did wonderful with the picture prompt. for a small short, there is a lot of lovely imagery that embraces the reader. i especially love your ending line: "white flakes cover ground, angels leave". it's kinda sad in a way, but it makes sense that the angels would leave in the winter time. they don't want their wings or halos to freeze up....lol!
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thank you !
gosh thank you for your beautiful comment ! xx
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Short and sweet.
Beautiful write. -
Wonderful
Very well done. best of luck in the contest.
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