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Terror look into the mirror

Engraved torture
Upon nameless epitaphs;
Vendetta bearing
World wanted fugitives

Few lead the many
Feudal system overboard,
Benevolence of reality
The present, drought!

Two sides of the same coin,
A devil in disguise-
Extremists Men of power alike,
Humanism victimized

The flesh and bones
Of innocence,
Crushed by
Nonchalant Indifference.

Fear dominates the body
Paralyses one's mind;
Silence, is but gold
Oppression contrived

Democracy, mockery
Freedom of speech;
Speak your mind
Then die, like a leech.


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  • still.she.waits
    June 27

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    oh politics.. the never ending battle of the world and it's greediness. I'm not overly fond of capitalizing every line, but I understand it can be a personal preference.


  • Antebellum
    June 24

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    Two sides of the same coin,
    A devil in disguise-
    Extremists Men of power alike,
    Humanism victimized "

    I love this stanza. Its so true.
    Great write.