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The Father said to the daughter,
"And how many times does She have to reject you before you stop going back to her?"
It was then that the daughter cried. For the Daughter realised She had hurt her beyond repair.
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Author notes
This will probably confuse people but I just wanted to post it as a poem, even though its not really one. I sort of like it the way it is.
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Sweety... spellcheck... "beyong"?
"For the Daughter realised She" -- And, is the "She" meant to be "She" or "He"?
I do like it though, very much. Saw it on your page and thought it was lyrics.
Is this about J by any chance?
Also... I hate you for being able to pull off something so short yet so meaningful.
Bitch. 
Waffle you scruffles xx
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Lol. thanks. and opps. didnt even notice the beyong. but the "She" is refering to a thrid person. and not about J. its what my father said to me about my mother after she turned around and said she didnt want to see me because her bf didnt want her to.
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That makes sense.
And, "oops", not "opps" hehehe.
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i love it. it is so thought provoking. great job
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This is deep, raw and honest, Sister of mine. Bravo on your courage for posting it.
You know where I am anytime you need to talk
'D' (Scott)
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*hugs* Thank you. The same for you two.
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