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Obscure Paranoia

Summon dusk to witness,
The twilight, of ignorance's blissfulness.
Dawn breaks from a distance
Echoing the staggering,
Subterranean silence.
A martyr of conceited arrogance
Overshadowing masks of polluted prejudice
The tree of knowledge; placid
Sheer veracity, perpetually lucid-
Drowned false ideologies in the drains
Immobile vanity defacing
Every key and every claim
Before sinking truth's kindled flame
Think, think again!

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Insired by Thoreau's quote:
"Rather than love, than money, than fame, give me TRUTH"

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