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Why Do I Still Love Her?

She値l scratch me and bite me
But I love her anyway
She値l beat up her brother
But I love her anyway
She値l sit on the printer
But I love her anyway
She値l run away for days
But I love her anyway
She値l not eat her cat food
But I love her anyway
She値l eat all the rabbits
But I love her anyway
She値l do everything wrong
Why do I still love her?

A contest entry

This is about my cat, yeah I'm a pushover when it comes to her. What do you think?

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  • KevinDunn
    May 22
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    Very good! A lovely poem!


  • catz Moderators member
    May 21
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    I have to laugh when reading this, which I did three times. Cats are great... their individuality, their snootiness, their total lovebility, and so much more It's no wonder that they get spoiled.

    What a cute poem and i wish you the best in the contst

    love and
    Mom


  • moaner
    May 21

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    hahaha yeap, this is a spoilt brat of a cat (bless'em hehe). nicely penned, good luck in my contest x