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Only Time Can Tell

She likes words'
Mist on herbs'
In touch with nature'
Like whistling birds,
Form structured with mystic curves,
the sun echos her beauty,
Her beauty echos the sun threw mystery words,
Mind of forethought and scrunity,
were always longings of mine'
with withstanding time'
that can only confess,
is emotion,
Malevolence is part of life,
Hurdling affliction is security,
loves is blind'
like death,
to see the light'
The Only allie is Time.

 

  Nickolous Nevins 1-1

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  • greyhaime
    May 22
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    welcome to allpoetry

    "loves is blind'
    like death,
    to see the light'
    The Only allie is Time."

    I really enjoyed these last lines in this,, well done, I think you may have a typo in there, you have"threw" when I think you may have meant "through".

    thanks for sharing this with us here and for joining the site,
    please keep up the writing,

    cheers



  • raspberry Greeters member
    May 22

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    Welcome to Allpoetry

    A truth told soo placidly yet smart, words chosen well.. in all a good poem Keep it up

    Cheers
    Archana
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