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The Silk Crimson Rose

Silken finger tips, firmly hold leatherette.
Pronouncing words silently to myself, as your
soul talks in whispers, grasping my heart.

Gentle music ignites flame, centre to my spirit.
Lighting garden with passion, exotic aroma’s  of
heat given as two hearts combine.

Aura golden mist, glides over midnight blue.
Starry glaze, dim lit moon, shine open window.
Peaceful atmosphere, cuddled lovers grasp.

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http://www.viningsgallery.com/featured-artists/fabian-perez/princess-diaries-iv.php4

Please forgive me it's been some time since I wrote anything I hope it is okay xxx

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    May 31
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    Well done. I love the opening stanza.
    excellent sway on the prompt.


    Delila