This just doesn't make any sense to me
that something so poetic as love
could render a person
with out a single syllable
to express how it is that they feel.
But let this be known
as the truth that it is
that there is no rose
more beautiful
than the love
that I feel for you.
You see
there is a level in ones mind
where words simply cannot reach
they cannot do justice
to one such as her.
Impossible as it seems
love has strangled my muse
with her bare hands.
In a list
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A contest entry
- This Heart Of Mine. by TheSpiralGenerator.
750 points, ended July 4, 102 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What Have I Missed? by Ken-Maverick.
400 points, ended October 9, 36 entries
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"This just doesn't make any sense to me
that something so poetic as love
could render a person
with out a single syllable
to express how it is that they feel."
Very cleverly said!!
All the best with this.
Ken -
Ha! I've always found the same to be true—I think it's because love in its essence is so much larger and better and brighter than words could ever be. Or maybe it's just because even poets are rendered speechless at eros's feet. Whatever it is, you've captured it here! Thanks for sharing!
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marvelous piece, dear. your words of great expression felt deeply.
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Ah I know the feeling so very very well
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OMG! This is so true in so many ways. I love the very last 2 lines. They make me giggle a bit. Awesome work here, Ma. best wishes in the contests to ya!
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yep.. I am hearing you, my muse has not worked for weeks, I also thought I would have much to pen, but no matter how hard I try, my words are blank.. well done
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Perhaps it is possible, as your title says. You may love a person so much, that words cannot be found to describe such love. I know the feeling.
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