For I could tell you everything
I could tell you how I feel every time I see you,
How you make my heart race,
Why I write my poetry,
How I dream of you every night,
How I had love at first sight,
How my love for you is immeasurable,
How just the thought of you brightens the corners of my heart,
How I have fallen to your spell,
How much I long to be with you,
How much pain you have caused me
How-
But it wouldn’t change anything,
For you have chosen him.
For I could tell you everything,
If only it made a difference.
Author notes
If you are reading this, I thank you for reading my poem. Sadly this will be my last, for hope rarely leads to a better ending.
Sincerely,
Cain Buckler - (you noble ivory idk why i put this I still don't know what it means, I just hoped I would)
OK just so people know.......
I write nearly all love poems, but none of them are actually about people I know personally. The whole point of my poetry is to show all the situations and trials of impossible love. So please don't read my poems and think that the poem is based around my life, or about anyone in particular.
A contest entry
- This Heart Of Mine. by TheSpiralGenerator.
750 points, ended July 4, 102 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Awesome write as always, it makes my heart ache and yearn for that love that I have also chased with out success. Keep Writing!
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how awsum...this is too gooooood!!
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How I had love at first sight
How my love for you is immeasurable,
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maybe fullstop/period after sight?
If only it made a difference
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maybe using a period at the end or ellipses...
other than those 2 points i thought your words were good, a genuine song showing feelings.
i will not rate it.
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