You see what you want to see,
But no mirrors have seen your soul,
Even mirrors can tell a thousand lies,
If you’re looking through closed eyes.
I see what you truly are,
Behind your masks,
Behind your smiles,
Your fake charades.
You are still beautiful in truth,
More beautiful if only you’d show the truth,
For there is beauty in truth.
Let me show you a mirror to your soul,
I’ll be your mirror, mirror on the wall,
For to me you are the fairest of all.
A contest entry
- Mask - Unmasked by Ken-Maverick.
700 points, ended June 3, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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JUDGED!!
This is really shaweet,
beauty is indeed skin deep? well done poet.
Thanks for entering and all the best to you in the contest.
Ken -
The journies into the utter darkness of anothers soul that we would endevour, hoping to illuminate the pitch with the light of love, can sometimes extingush our own flame of vitality...yet, on we still press.
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I was just reading though what i've got to look for inspiration, and i read you comment and was like: wow you're really poetic in your comments... and thank you...
I think you may have inspired me... to write half a poem... I don't often write whole poems in one sitting...
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I'd be most curious to read what you may write.
And I know how it goes with the writting, though sometimes I might write something and take years to finish it, sometimes i've written a piece in just a couple hours or less.
If you do write a something, can I have an IM preview?
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"Even mirrors can tell a thousand lies,
If you’re looking through closed eyes." - very beautiful and so perfectly put together.
this is an amazing poem, it was pretty short and it said everything it had to, beautiful!
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Yay!!!
totally made my day better!
Thank you =D
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