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Murder

the bloody knife comes down
once again stabbing
through the screaming woman
her pleas of pain and fear
sending wonderful shivers of pleasure through him
he keeps stabbing
the blood soaking through her carpet
ripping through her chest
blood coming from her mouth
as he watches the woman die

hes at a new house
the unsuspecting woman hasn't seen you yet
he grabs her from behind
the wire going around her throat
pulling against it
your laughter ringing in the struggling woman's ear
as she kicks you pull tighter
blood going down her throat from the wire
as her struggling stops
she hangs there in your arms

another woman's house
again
you see her in the tub
the slender curves of her body showing the beauty of the kill
he grins in the darkness
grabbing her head before she realizes whats going on
her head is shoved viciously under water
the crack of something breaking is heard
her skull has cracked
as she struggles beneath the reddening water
her struggling stops quickly
as does her screams for her help beneath the surface
her husband never even knew he was here.

Stalking them is fun
He see's his next target
he moves toward her
not realizing danger
he takes the knife from his pocket
as she turns
the gun in her hand
a cop
your spree is over
as she fires
the bullet ripping through your chest
killing you pretty quickly
you gasp for air knowing its to late
you go limp
your spree has ended

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