I remember the last thing I said to her
before she left that fateful day
I wasnt the last she talked
but i was close
I told her not to die
and she did
i found out 3 months later
as i sat at my computer
reading facebook
a message popped up
telling me of the death
of the one girl
id love more then anyone
She was my pride, my existence
at that point in my life
I hated myself with a passion for what i had said to her
I wish i had never left her side
but that was not my fault
moving sucks when you leave the one you love
she was mine, she was perfect
i greived and wept for her deep in my sleep
why did you have to die
we were perfect when we were together
you knew what i liked
and didnt liked
you didnt care about what i looked like
or did when we werent together
why did I have to say that before you left
why did you drink and drive
questions that i ask myself these day
only bring back that pain
i remember you through
I shall never forget that walk through the park
the dog tieing us together
as wed kiss for the first time
ill never forget our own special spiderman kiss
I wish i had gone to your funeral
but i found out 3 months later
imagine the pain i had
i refused anyones help for a week
i miss you
please come back to me
but i know you cant
i will never forget the time we had together
Author notes
This is dedicated to my ex-girlfriend Kayla Ludwig.
I will always love her.
She was the first girl i ever loved but wouldnt be the last
R.I.P.
What do you think of my poem?
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wow i really felt the pain in this poem. it has great flow. i almost cried when i read this. very sad. im so sorry. keep writing though.
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I really felt the pain here, it was a bit of a weird write at the beginning but once I read the author notes I understood it. Really great.
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very interesting, it says everything hat needs to be said and it flows nicely too. Very creative write, keep going
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This poem is amazing especially because it's so personal. You did a phenomenal job, I'm really sorry that this happened.
-- Tor
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Thank you :[
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wow, its runs deep. real poetry is one that comes from the heart. this is it here
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before she left that faithful day - i would have said fateful
give this one a good proofread to make sure you said it as you wish. i love the way it flows it tells so much. this is what i was talking about poems being a release. this IS TRUE POETRY. it comes from your soul and i can still see the pain. im sosorry for your loss but dont be hard on yourself. remember those good times and smile when you think of her instead of crying i think that is what shed wish
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awwe thats rly sad v-v
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damn this is so sad :[ i'm so sorry
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