I see your face…
Moving away…
I wave goodbye…
Will you be back someday?
Look in my eyes…
Tell me the truth…
Should I be concerned?
Am I just a fluke?
The sound of your voice…
The rhythm inside…
Is it already the end?
Is this our goodbye?
A snowflake in winter…
A leaf in the fall…
A seasonal fling…
They don’t last at all…
Tell me what you see…
When you look at me…
Tell me what’s behind…
My bloodshot eyes…
Is it a betrayal…
Lying in wait…
Is it revenge…
Winning the debate…
Tell me whats inside…
Tell me what I hide…
Can you see through me…
Can you see through me…
I cant see the forest…
For the trees…
i cant see the wind…
but I can shoot the breeze…
something is wrong…
I can feel it amiss…
It feels kind of off…
And it smells a bit like fish…
Can you see me…
Like I see you…
Am I an enigma…
Or am I see-through…
A snowflake in winter…
A leaf in the fall…
A seasonal fling…
They don’t last at all…
Tell me what you see…
When you look at me…
Tell me what’s behind…
My bloodshot eyes…
Is it a betrayal…
Lying in wait…
Is it revenge…
Winning the debate…
Tell me whats inside…
Tell me what I hide…
Can you see through me…
Can you see through me…
Author notes
not written through personal experience, but for a friend....
A contest entry
- Prewrite contest by Sadistic klown girl.
1000 points, ended June 2, 155 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This was a well written piece. I hope your friend is feeling better now. It is hard thing to go through and cope with. Thank you for sharing.
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oh i like, but i agree i don't think the elipsis work for everyline, but i love your rhyme, and the images and ideas.. i think your friend will like it..
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i know the feeling of this poem all to well. i went through all these emotions last summer. so your friend should realyl like this
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I like it a lot... it's very moving with a lot of feelings... i think your friend will like it
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Aawwwww lovely
its so moving,
but the dots kinda annoyed me after a while.
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