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Longing for Your Love

Longing for you love
I find myself lost in you
I hear your voice and it makes me melt
I see your eyes and I am hypnotized
Your sent lingers in the air
Your smile is so contagious
Your laugh echos
I long to hug you
I long to kiss you
My heart, aching for you every day
Missing you every night
Wishing you felt the same
Wanting to tell you
But knowing I can't
Longing for your love
I wait

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  • iloveyou77
    May 31, 2009
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    good

    i love it so much keep up the good work!!~!!!


  • none the less.
    May 30, 2009
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    this has a really good flow, its a really beautiful yet sad poem. love i!


  • liveyourlife27
    May 27, 2009

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    Nice

    LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! ! lol anywho yeah i really liked this one. sorry haven't been adding any lately. I've just been really busy! felt this way quite a few times! good write.


  • Immer Leben
    May 24, 2009

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    *hugs tight*
    I feel the same way towards someone.
    I hope one day you find your happiness and true love.
    This is a great poem, and I love the last two lines.
    "Longing for your love
    I wait"
    Excellent, hun.