I need to feel the ever lasting pain,
I can't be loved I have no soul,
I can't be trusted, I am merciless,
I am calculating and cruel, I feel no pity,
And I'll leave you alone to rot in hell.
Stay your breath, I won't care,
Hold your thoughts, for I won't share,
Don't touch me cause I'll snap,
Don't you dare for I won't care.
I can't die, I claim no fear.
I'll just wander here for the gods won't accept me,
I'll linger here for the demons rejected me,
I have no where to go, so I'll stop,
I'll wander her, cigar in mouth, for the Angel of Death to bring me to redemtion.
I unno.
Comments
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Yep this is great. Most days I can really relate to this. Great job and keep on writing!!!
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Hmmm....rhyme was interesting but good, nice images lol...but you write as though no one wants you. I find that HIGHLY untrue ♥♥
And I agree with the said Hannah below, I love when you write. Gives me a moment to peer into your mind. It's nice
But... *grabs the cigar and steps on it* these'll kill you! Interesting write anyways <3333
Love Rhi♥
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Wow, such a powerful emotion, I really like this. So full of anger and creative. It's very deep! It shows you have no care in the world great poem
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Dark.
Creepy.
Understandable.
Loved it.
As I do all of your stuff..
It was great. Loved the rhyme.
I love it when you write.
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