dandelion-
in hand stripped bare
my wish ~ adrift
Author notes
Prompt; Looking Forward
Inspiration;
http://www.psfk.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/02/dandelion.jpg
In a list
A contest entry
- Poetry Formed XLV - by Bear - by Arkbear.
700 points, ended May 27, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This beautiful haiku reminded me of my daughter.
She loves to do this with dandelions. Thank you for reminding me. Bravo!
Don
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nice
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sweet pollen
it's all i've ever dreamed of too
excellent metaphor man
congrats
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I love this one!lane
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ever wonder what the wish is? lol
ok dont answer that
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I really like this one. This is likely the best description I've seen of a dandelion when making a wish (in any form of poetry). Bravo!
Best wishes in the contest!
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thanks for the great comment...I keep trying to master this form...
Basho I can never be
ill just keep trying
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Mmmm....rich in visuals and imagery is soft and lingering to my senses -
Lovely job....
...adrift....*sigh*
Bear -
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thanks bear...great prompt and picture inspiration...How could I resist
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Aha! How very clever!
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hi frogz Ill catch up soon
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oh...this is beautiful!! I was trying to write something from the picture on the contest page, but my mind went blank. Glad it did, because you hit the big one with this entry. Best wishes to you.
Sam
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thank you sam
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Nicely done. So soft and wistful.
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thanks blue
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Very beautiful haiku, with the delight of all those wishes floating away on the winds of spring. Good luck in the contest!
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thanks susie...I know I will read one of yours here
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excellent~
Beautiful Mally
I love this...........
Perfection indeed
Best of luck in the contest
Hugs
Susan~~~~
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thanks susan...and where is yours?
I loved writing, a haiku a day series
for national poetry month thsi past april
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