This world we are in
is just a fairy tale,
because it seems so real
until you fall.
you were like a waterfall,
freezing me,
then taking me,
crushing me,
and then you let go.
i wondered why
you would treat me this way,
leaving me,
without any words to say
will i every find out,
or is that just in the fairy tales?
ugh. why cant i write good?!
Comments
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This is really good (: you can write good don't be silly xD xxx
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great poem, nicely done.
one thing i suggest is starting the next sentence with capitals, so it may flow even better
great job, keep it up
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