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The frog prince

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Sometimes things get out of hand
even here in fairyland,
someone had put a rumour round
that a prince who was renowned,
tangled with a witch one day,
for this offence she made him pay.
This really left the prince agog,
to find that he was now a frog.
I caught him in the woods today,
and I'll not let him get away.
I kissed him, but to my surprise
he still wore his frog like guise,
and as I have'nt got a dog,
I thought that I would walk this frog,
and find the witch who laid the curse
to put the spell into reverse.
Then I will stick to him for life
and be his chubby fairy wife;
but the collar will remain
latched to a heavy ball and chain.

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  • suseann
    May 28
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    Whimsical satire of smooth but silly verse.Loved it!

  • Very good

    Well deserved gold trophy, my friend. Congratulations. I loved the poetic story, and it fit the picture perfectly.

    Nicely done!

  • Vera Rich
    May 25
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    A very neat poem - and works well with the illustration - but to my mind, even better without it!


  • dutch2lips gold member
    May 24
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    oh such a good take on the picture, thank you for entering!

  • Very funny! I love the twist on the fairy tale.


  • Sonja
    May 23

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    This one makes me to smile the "old" you is back with a magic of rhyme and the secret of perfect fairy tales. Bravo.
    ~Sonja~

  • SadmanJim
    May 21

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    Cute!
    and a perfect take on the picture prompt. I love the way your rhymes make my eye "leap" from line to line. GL in the contest!

    Write On!
    jIM


  • Wandika gold member
    May 20
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    rivit!


  • Darianna
    May 20
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    Lols!!! So funny! This is a great story for the picture!

    Good luck in the contest!

    Dari xxx

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