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The Lustful Ghost

You hardly ever let me
Eat your meadows
Taste your cherries
Eat your chocolate
Have the the bite of your creamy mounds
Enter your pleasure islands.

But now I'm all might,
all power
I can watch you unrobe yoyrself
Rub your roses and cherries
Play with your forbidden zones
Stretch your breasts
and kiss your strawberries
Spread the legs of your baby's bedsitter
and drink her milky juices like a hungry pussy cat
Ride your 13-year old neighbor in the bed of your life partner.

Now I can do whatever I wanna do...
watch,
kiss,
rub,
srub,
tickle,
nibble,
bite, eat,
and enter.

Stop me if you can, my loveless callous wife!

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I chose blank number 2 (Ghost)

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  • vitch
    October 15
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    Awesome, absolutely awesome. Few spelling errors but I got it.


  • laura0757 gold member
    October 11

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    you have some real good lines here...i liked the flow of it..........good luck,,,if its a contest entry..........


  • laura0757 gold member
    October 11
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    oh my god..........racy................


  • nasty24
    October 11
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    this is very erotic i like the imagry it leave to the mind. keep up the great work.


    • Happy3
      October 11
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      Nasty18

      I can keep it up if inspired by you, baby!


  • daffodilblossom
    September 24

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    i like the intro

    fine piece by the way sapphire feet is a collective group if you go to my page i have 3 more poems about her and soon more will come

  • so sensual and erotic.... love the feel of this!

    becca

  • sorry but this can't be judged
    rules are rule
    you need to pick a blank number from the list in the contest
    and no adult I told others that so I got to be fair
    I understand if you want to drop out but I do love how sexy this poem is and its well penned


    • Happy3
      May 21
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      hollowriter

      I chose blank number 2 (Ghost)...I don't know if it is that what you mean.

      • kind of, well i'm going to have dq you
        but I loved you poem but I always like your metaphoric sexy writes

  • wicked bliss...

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