The skies watch over me with only pinpoints of sparkling starlight, and they twinkle and glitter like diamond tears on soft blue velvet. With a quiet smile, the moon shines down on me, bathing me in a milky glow so beautiful, I may begin to shed crystalline tears of my own. The night brings me joy and wonder that nothing else does, the sweet grass crushed under my feet and the world ahead of me. The night has brought me serenity, and the heavens have opened up above me, shedding their purple glow over my skin, and for once, I am an indigo dreamer.
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- you'll catch me looking in your direction, but I promise not to stare [Titles] by xxRainbowDawnxx.
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I love the vast amount of imagery in this, it's like I'm under the scope myself, in the romantic position of gazing up at the beauty...
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Awesome...
very beautiful description, i could see everything in my mind's eye as if i had been there... love it!
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This is a beautiful poem, that is rich with imagery.
The way you have it written, it reads like a paragraph and not a poem. You should break it up into shorter lines. I truly believe it help the flow of your otherwise beautiful write.
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Good Poem
This is a very well written poem with some nice imagery very imaginative there are two slight alterations I would make "of far nothing else" makes no sense.."Of the starlight sky" does.."Purple" instead of "purpling" the rest is very good, Hope I have been helpful. Best Wishes and keep writing
.......George......
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.....oh srry what!?
that was really good! but like how come non of it rhymes?....not even one? but u know what? who gives a fudge cuz it was good anyway! and the whole aby thing sleeping becuz ur poem title has the word "dreamer" in it and the baby ws sleeping was reaalllllllllllyyyyyyyyy good! great gob! -
GLORIOUSLY MANTASTIC
MY GOD VALLIE! WHERE DID THIS COME FROM?
okaaaaay. you are no longer allowed to say u suck. or i will disown you.
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