It's been only a few
days. But I'm the point
of breaking down again
for the second day. Only
talked once since you left.
I am missing you.
Sitting here in my room.
You photo in my hands.
Your voice playing like a
record in my head. Our song
playing on my radio.
Silent tears fall from
my eyes. It's late at night.
12am and I am up. Crying
don't want to sob loudly. Not
wanting my family to see. I
want to be strong for you.
I know that when you
come back. All will be so
much better. But right now
I just cry. I miss you more then
you know. I love you loads.
See what I'm trying
to say is one thing. Hurry
back I'm missing you.
Author notes
My BF is in Spain and gone for two weeks and i am really missing him
How did you feel when reading this poem?? What came to mind? What would you change?
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I really like it anyone can relate to and its just beautiful
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oh i am sorry. he will be back soon!
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love it
this is a great right you share your feelings so beautifully..missing a love one is extreamy hard..message me if you ever need to tlk -
Don't cry, love. You have me! .hugs.
another marvelous poem. you truely do penn your feelings perfectly. wow. wow.
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thanks so much for the great comment.
Once he's home I'll stop crying
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Amazing job.
Don't cry sweetie. You always have God. There's no need to stay up. Pray, and let God be with you. I do understand your poem. I feel simular. (Although I'm on meds) I know how hard it can be.
Love,
Evemauy
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Awwwwwwwwwww this was a sweet write.
I know how much you miss him. But he'll
be home soon. Just think of when you'll
be able to hold him close. -
I felt a little sad when I read this poem. I thought about my ex-girlfriend when I read it. Well written!
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