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Charmed and dangerous

prue, piper, and phoebe were comin home to a great maverlous home
but something felt so gloomy and glum they wondered if they should
go to bed wonereding if there is something they dread but in time
they will notice that they soon will be .. the most famous witches and the
power of three

does you know or do you like charmed

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  • really liked it and i think it would be better in stanza's but it was amazing.

  • its really good ^^ i enjoyed reading it
    welcome to AP
    cya at school moneday

  • Welcome to Allpoetry

    This is pretty interesting, shows your admiration for the Charmed show, which I like a lot!

    I think you should break it out into stanzas

    Prue, Piper and Phoebe were
    coming home to a marvelous home

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  • raspberry Greeters member
    May 22

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    Welcome to allpoetry

    lol.. This short piece, is finely written
    Hope u enjoy the site..

    Good work..

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    Archana
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