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Decussated Paths

As the untamed fire,
Devours all air around him,
This month with you,
Has taken the breath away from thy body.

Like a new born child,
Learns new things everday,
I am taught your ways and thoughts,
And find there is always something more.

Just like the white rose grows,
flourishing with beauty,
Our love has blosmed,
To be something resplendent.

God created a road,
For each of us to rove,
And I thank him daily,
That my path has decussated with yours.

Author notes

This is dedicated to my boyfriend. Love ya baby

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