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Words to Shrivel Hope (H.M.)


Across tongues they dance in cruelty's revenge,
patterns to shape withering dreams.
Wrapped in ugly faces of taunting words
and heart's rhythmic beat comes to a standstill.

Swirling, cold winds shake belief's foundations
and Spring's flowers stand headless,
colourless in a harsh storm that thrashes love's origin,
left as stalks of unfullilled promise.



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  • Polaja Greeters member
    June 4

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    I really like the way that you have taken inspiration from the prompt here it is very original, and the last line is stunning thank you for entering!


    Polly

  • ah poor hope - she always gets picked on, but she shrugs the negative words off her shoulders and dances into a bright future, i think she is special needs. a good poem


  • penman gold member
    May 20
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    Wonderful

    Such a gifted creation. Your words were so well chosen. Best of luck in the contest.