How amazing, He put you in my path
And we manage the time granted
Together and apart
Maximizing love like we wanted
And now, again, like it happens a lot
We find ourselves in another trial
Testing our will and our want
While our love remains idle
Yet I know this is stronger
Than any distance imposed
And though frail and saddened I wander
Our bond will cleraly show
That barriers like this one can’t hurt
Love so pure and immense
Ties of souls, deep in our chest
And soon we’ll beget
Joy and laughter once again
Showing the world our resolve
Wasted tears in vain
Much more stronger our love
Author notes
My girl lives in Puerto Rico, i live in Forida, talk about distance... we dont see eachother for months some times, but it is all worth it, our love is great and soon we will look back and realize that this has made our bond that much stronger. good luck.
A contest entry
- Need Some Cheering Up Please :( by Englandgirl2008.
400 points, ended May 20, 11 entries
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My bf happens to live in the UK and I live out here in California. So talk about long distance. We've been together for a year and 3 months. Never met face to face yet but will in October of 2009. I know that our relationship is growing stronger and we have a strong bond.
This poem was well written. The flow was somewhat ok no offense. -
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thank you
whoa, yours is a story of long distance indeed. im sure u can endure. wish u the best. i wrote this today at work on my 15 min break. i know it needs a lot of work, but i was more interested in the message than the poetical qualities. -
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It had a great message to it.
I liked the message and it did
deserve the HM given to it.
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