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you're dead to me

The corpse lay broken and beaten,
having been mangled by this last escape.

It felt the plane begin to shake,
but never blinked a lash.

The other pilot had left long ago;
the corpse is stubborn and blind.

The corpse jumps to the clouds
and lands in the raging sea.

convinced by the sea,
it seeks life elsewhere-
because the pilot left it alone.












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Author notes

This is my most symbolic poem ever. I'm actually pretty happy about it even though I could probably do better..maybe

*not finished

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