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Do you know why death fascinates me?

 

From the day we are born
we are waiting,
waiting to die,
waiting for death,
to proclaim it’s victory

Children grow up
much too swiftly
become mature
watch their bodies ripen.
But in the midst of growth
the line between
progress  and decay
becomes blurred

Is this the prettiest you will ever be?
Right after puberty
your hips and breast lose
the firmness you just now
have begun to love

What is the use in living,
in breathing in everybody’s
decaying odours
as our bodies
slowly and surely
work their way to the grave

From the day we are born
We are waiting
Waiting for this skin
to lose its elasticity,
waiting for wrinkles
(the marks of pain) or
bags under our eyes
to paint our faces insane
.
.
.
I’d rather spend my dying time being unborn
Then waiting for death to overpower me
Demise is always there, like the flesh we are born in
Though sometimes I wished I had a different form
One less prone to decay
But death must leave its mark
And everyone’s waiting

 

 

Author notes

I despise watching myself getting older.
I wrote this for a contest.
The prompt was everyone's waiting

A contest entry

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  • sxylolypop-aka dj gold member
    November 27
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    amazing. alot of good points and the truth i may add.. very well written and a strong ending to a fine piece. very nice keep up the good work a fine piece of art t

  • Mmm.

    This was very good,
    And so true.
    Beautiful write;
    Thank you for entering;
    Good luck darling.
    <3


  • JinSays gold member
    June 7

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    you and me both. I was nine months pregnant, and 23 the first time I found a gray hair in my head. I cried like a baby. I saw myself getting old right then. That was 15 years ago. Now I just dont even look.
    Love,
    jin


  • metal4ever
    May 30
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    awesome poem, really great

  • This was really good. Everyone waits for death, life is like a waiting room here on earth and I think you captured it perfectly. Awesome job don't change it at all. The essence of death is something that scares a lot of people but in reality it's jut another step to take in life. Birth, life, death, and if your lucky enough you get to do it all over again.


  • teddybare gold member
    May 22
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    oh yeh death

    so big and scary a topic has been a thorn in mans side since conception... but i have no fear of death
    death is a fraid of me ... why i died like six months ago but death is too chicken to tell me ... no im kidding but .. know this death in my mind is birth and birth can kind of be thought of as the death of the cycle... idk if thats making any sense but great write you have here

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