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Stars in the Sky

stars in the sky,
dont know where i am
wishing i was with you
but i know i cant,
because you died that summers day,
the day you lost your life
i lost my heart,
one day i shall join you
one day i shall die
it will not be the end in my heart
it shall be the beginnning....
of my peace

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  • Rory Williamson
    May 20

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    awwh...this reminds me of my ex...who died a year ago...Very touching to me I can totally relate to this...-hug-


  • Antebellum
    May 20

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    wow so sad. 

     

    "the day you lost your life
    i lost my heart, "

     

     

     I completly understand this.


  • Seraphim Flame
    May 20

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    The pain of loss, affects us all, thank you my good friend for sharing with us a part of you history