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Tired Soul

Feelings frozen
Inside hardened hearts
Tears left to freeze
Across withered skin
Dreaming of warmth
To thaw my tired soul


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  • individuality gold member
    September 10

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    a good poem penned- ah the spirit sighs at times yes, in all of us, emotions like snowed in mountains, and the skin as sheets of time, weathered by ancient rhythms.


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    May 21

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    Sometimes feelings like this can be there...but there will always be a warm sunny day coming up to make you feel better again...isn't it?

    It's a long time since I saw you write something,
    was a pleasure to read...

    XXJeannette